2011安徽高考英语作文范文
【篇一：2009-2013安徽高考英语作文_范文和详解】
2009-2013安徽高考英语作文 范文和详解
（2009.安徽卷）
假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。
演讲稿的主要内容应认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：
【参考范文】good morning, ladies and gentlemen.
some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. i fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. they have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. my suggestion is: tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. if you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.
thank you!
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。本文中使用了look into, make sure, be bound to等短语以及as，if引导的状语从句和why引导的宾语从句。
[2010安徽卷]
假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机（cell）和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“which would you give up:tv, cell, or web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
we are now living in an information age, in which tv,cells and the web are widely used. it seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them.
however, if i had to give up one of them, i would turn off the tv rather than switch off my cell or cut off the internet. i could do without tv because few shows take my fancy and therere too many commercials. besides, most programs on tv are also available elsewhere.
as for cells and the web, they are more necessary to me. i need a cell to keep in
touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the internet.
点评：本文层次清晰。第一段提出文章的主题，第二段提出选择并阐述理由，第三段说明了保留另外两个选择的原因，这三段用了连词however，as for 是段落衔接自然。在文章中，作者用了定语从句in which tv，cells…、虚拟语气、rather than、原因状语从句等复杂的句式，句子长短结合，语言流畅，充分展示了作者写作功底。
2011年
书面表达(满分25分)
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“my approach to difficulties in learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。
注意：1、词数100左右；
2、短文中不能出现本人相关信息。
one possible version
my approach to difficulties in learning
as high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of learning. everyone has their own way to deal with them. here i would like to
share mine.
when i am faced with a dificulty, i ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages. in this way, i can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.
however, when it is something beyond my sompetence, i turn to classmates or teachers for help. sometimes i also ask my parents for advice. as a result, i have made steady progress in my studies.
分析：
2011年安徽卷写作部分的话题贴近学生生活，考察学生学习中的现实问题，探讨如何解决学习中遇到的困难。文章的主线是写自己如何解决困难，这一点是考生审题时需要注意的，如果通篇写成了what（即学习中遇到的各种困难）、而没有提及自己的解决办法，这无
疑犯了跑题的大忌。和一些其他省区作文不同，安徽卷的作文题目没有给考生提供要点，这一方面有利于一些考生的发挥，但另一方面也会给许多考生设置组织结构的难题。笔者认为，要根据遇到的困难来分析解决的办法，并在面对不同困难当中总结不同的解决方法，行文中加入举例、对比论证，有理有据，让文章摆脱要点的堆砌，论证更具体而有针对性。总之，考生要自圆其说、合理论证、逻辑清晰，避免语言错误，完成一篇高质量的高考英语作文。
2012年
第二节 书面表达(满分25分)
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流，主题是高中生对文，理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿，向他们介绍你所做的选择，并说明选择的理由。
注意： 1.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2.词数120左右； 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇：文科 arts; 理科:science
good afternoon, everyone.
welcometo our school! ______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
thanks！
one possible version
good afternoon，everyone.
welcome to our school! the topic i’m going to talk about is the choice
between arts and science. as is known to all, students in china can’t study both arts and science. therefore, a choice between them is bound to be made.
at the end of my first year in high school, i decided to study science rather than arts. and the reasons are as follows: the most important one is that i love science, which can show me the mysteries of nature and the universe. what’s more, i’m good at it. so, it is far easier for me to learn science than arts. last but not least, i want to become a scientist in the future. it is science that will equip me with necessary abilities.
now, years have passed, and my affection for science is much greater than before. i hold the view firmly that my choice is absolutely right.
thanks!
2013年安徽高考
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明, 从我做起”为主体的征文活动, 请你以“on the way to school”为题, 写一篇英语短文.
内容主要包括:
1. 遵守交通法规;
2. 注意举止文明.
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与你本人相关的信息;
4. 短文的题目已为你拟好, 不计入总次数.
试题分析
2013年安徽高考作文，属于提纲式要点作文，话题为：讲文明从我做起.要求学生写一篇作文，叙述自己上学途中文明的行为举止。这个话题体现了实用性和生活性原则，贴近学生的生活和学习，为考试所熟知。提纲雷书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成普通顺畅的语句，因此要组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要注意简洁明了，开门要见山。
审题要素：
1，注意人称，应该用第一人称。
2，注意时态的正确使用，根据试题的要求，本文用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3，注意恰当使用逻辑词语，使各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。
思路指导：
首段，引入话题--发生在身边的不文明现象，从我做起。(start from my self) 其次，上学途中应该怎么做到文明：遵守交规；个人举止。
参考范文：
these days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. as for me, it should start on the way to school.
ealthy. not only will i keep from littering and spitting anywhere, i will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. i hope my behavior will make a difference.
【篇二：2011年高考英语作文范文(全国卷)】
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2011高考英语作文范文（全国卷）
题目：本人简介；求助内容；约定时间
你的联系方式：email:**************，phone:12345678
点击查看全国卷作文真题
版本1：沪江网校sue老师
dear sir/madam,
this application comes to you from one of your summer course students. my name is lihua, from china. i got the syllabus yesterday, and the courses are quite interesting.
however, some points are still making me confused. here are two problems i’ve got:
1. where can i get the textbooks? can i borrow them from the school library instead of buying the brand new ones?
2. my oral english is imperfect, so do i have some extra courses to practice it, or maybe we have english corner?
about our meeting time, i hope this friday, 3pm. would be great for you.
you could also contact me by email or phone.
email:**************
phone:12345678
look forward to your reply.
yours,
li hua
版本2： 沪江网校小方老师
dear sir/madam,
my full name is li hua, a student of summer courses here.
i am writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles i encountered when learning the course of business english. my puzzle is that i don’t know whether this course mainly teaches english or teaches in english. in other words, how could i balance between business knowledge and english itself?
i hope you could give me some directions so that i can work it out without too much difficulty. i am available at 8 am on wednesday. would that be ok? please do feel free to contact me by e-mail or telephone at any time.
******************************
my phone number is 12345678.
look forward to your reply!
yours,
lihua
【篇三：2011高考英语作文范文】
2011高考英语作文范文（5篇）
2011高考英语作文真题（湖北卷）
请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork. teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语； ②除诗歌外，文体不限； ③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；
④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称； ⑤词数为100左右。
years of school life has taught me a lot of things, of which teamwork is the most important for me.
in face, i didnt realize its importance until i was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. at first, i did most of the duties myself while other students cared little about class activities. as a result, i was tired out and depressed. then i turned to my teacher and he advised me to cooperate with others. thus i began to recognize the strengths of my classmates and have everyone do their part in class. it is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient.
2011高考英语作文真题范文 （陕西卷）
第三节 书面表达（满分30分）
假设你是中学生李华。 在一位名叫tigermom的学生家长博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。
i’m the mohter of a fourteen-year-old. i have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. she has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keeping telling me that i put too much pressure on her. am i worng?
写作要点：
1、表明自己的看法； 2、陈述自己的理由（可举例说明）；
3、提出至少两条建议。
要求：
1、短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。
2、短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。
3、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。
4、书写须清晰、工整。
hi, tigermom,
what puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in china. my idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. there are many examples around us. some all-a students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. the reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them
grow up mentally and physically.
so i suggest that you take your friends’ advice. more importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.
北京卷
四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节 情景作文（20分）
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事。请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。
第二节 开放作文（15分）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50。
in your spoken english class, your teacher shows you the following picture. you asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）
第一节 情景作文（20分）
一、内容要点：
1、老师滑倒 2、学生送老师看病
3、学生看望老师4、老师回班上课
二、one possible version:
last monday, we were having our chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. we were all worried about her. one of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic immediately. it turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. the following day, we went to visit her with flower and fruit. seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. this thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. we were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
第二节 开放作文（满分15分）
one possible version：
in the picture, there stands a tree full of fruit on one side of the stream. across the stream, a man is trying to reach out on the edge of the bank for the fruit with a net attached to a pole. not far away there is a bridge that can lead him to the tree for more fruit.
the message conveyed in the picture is clear. in pursuing a dream. we might focus on only one way of making it come true, forgetting that there may be alternatives. as indicated in the picture, if the man is willing to look for other possibilities, he can find a better and more rewarding way to achieve his goal. all he has to do is to turn around, cross the bridge and walk to the tree.
2011高考英语作文真题范文（安徽卷）
第二节：
one possible version
my approach to difficulties in learning
as high school students, we run into one difficulty after another in the process of
learning. everyone has their own way to deal with them. here i would like to share mine.
when i am faced with a dificulty, i ususlly choose to refer to relevant learning materials or web pages. in this way, i can not only it out but also improve my ability to overcome problems all by myself.
however, when it is something beyond my sompetence, i turn to classmates or teachers for help. sometimes i also ask my parents for advice. as a result, i have
made steady progress in my studies.
2011全国卷高考作文范文
第二节书面表达(满分25分)(注意：在试题卷上作答无效)
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learning center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1．本人简介； 2．求助内容：
3．约定时间；
4．你的联系方式(email：lihua@1236．com；phone：12345678)。 注意：1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3．结束语已为你写好。
dear sir/madam,
im li hua, a chinese student taking summer courses in your university. im writing to ask for help. i came here last month and found my courses interesting. but i have some difficulties with note-taking and i have no idea of how to use the library. i was told the learning center provides help for students and im anxious to
get help from you. i have no class on tuesday mornings and friday afternoons. please let me know which day is ok with you. you may email or phone me. here are myemailaddressandphonenumber:**************;12345678.
look forward to your reply.
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