四六级写作必备热点话题之四——盲目跟随他人危害
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the negative influences of blindly following others. You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 参考范文：（下划线处为重点核心表达） It is difficult to the point of impossibility for average men to imagine a time without self-identity in the competitive society full of changes, chances and challenges. I have always been of the impression that blindly following others seems far more challenging than beneficial. There is no doubt in saying that imitation is the premise of learning, which would also exert a detrimental influence over one’s personal development. A vast array of masses are the living proof that being average without individual persona does not work. Thus, hardly can they extricate themselves from the popular culture of homogenization. If this is the case, we should strike a perfect balance between learning from others and thinking independently, distinguishing between right and wrong with our own judgement. Conversely, if we go with the flow, it follows that we may deeply sink into a dilemma due to our loss of self-identity. With all the analysis taken into account, there lies a natural 1 / 4
connection between individual originality and the mosaic beauty of the world.
In a nutshell, it is crucial that masses be sensible enough to select the refined and discard the crude. Only by accepting and advocating our own way of critical thinking as daily pursuit and pleasure can we effectively respond to the world.
范文翻译：
在这个充满变革、机遇和挑战的竞争型社会中，普通人很难想象有什么时候是不需要自我认同感的。我一直认为盲目地跟随别人与其说更有益，不如说更具有挑战性。 毫无疑问，模仿是学习的前提，但它也可能会对一个人的个人发展产生不利的影响。大量的普通人是活生生的例子，证明没有个性的平庸是行不通的。因此，他们很难摆脱不断同化他们的流行文化。如果是这样的话，我们应该在向别人学习和自己独立思考之间取得一个完美的平衡，用我们自己的判断来明辨是非。相反，如果我们随波逐流，我们可能会因为失去自我认同而陷入困境。综上所知，个体的独创性与世界的多元化之美之间存在着一种天然的联系。
简而言之，重要的是人们要足够理智地去取其精华，弃其糟粕。只有把接受和倡导我们自己的批判性思维方式作为日常的追求和乐趣，我们才能有效地应对这个世界。
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重点核心词组：
（1）self-identity 自我认同
（2）blindly following others 盲目地追随他人
（3）exert a detrimental influence over sth 对…产生不利的影响 （4）extricate oneself from sth 使某人摆脱…
（5）strike a perfect balance between A and B 在A和B之间取得完美的平衡
（6）distinguish between right and wrong 明辨是非 （7）go with the flow 随波逐流
（8）select the refined and discard the crude 取其精华，弃其糟粕
重点核心句型：
（1）It is difficult to the point of impossibility for average men to imagine a time without（sth）in the competitive society full of changes, chances and challenges.
解析：这个句子使用it作形式主语，真正的主语是to imagine …; in the competitive society 是状语，full of… 做后置定语修饰society。
（2）There is no doubt in saying that （sth） is the premise of learning, which would also exert a detrimental influence over one’s personal development.
解析：前半句使用了一个宾语从句，由that引导，作saying的宾语；
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后半句使用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句修饰前面的imitation。
（3）Thus, hardly can they extricate themselves from ….
解析：这是一个部分倒装句，当hardly位于句首时要将助动词can倒装到主语they前面。
（4）Only by accepting and advocating （sth） as daily pursuit and pleasure can we effectively respond to the world. 解析：这也是一个部分倒装句，当only+状语位于句首时要进行部分倒装，by accepting and advocating …是方式状语，将助动词can倒装到主语we的前面。
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