【篇一：2014安徽中考作文满分范文《说说我自己》
及点评】
2014安徽中考作文满分范文《说说我自己》及点评 中考作文是中考语文考试的重要题目，中考生们要注意平时对作文的练习。经常阅读优秀作文，能提高自己的写作能力。下面为大家提供2014安徽中考作文满分范文《说说我自己》及点评，供大家赏析和学习。 【作文题目】
请以“说说我自己”为题，写一篇文章。(55分) 【提示与要求】
(1)请你从“温暖”“自由”“孤单”“烦心”四个词语中选择一个，把题目补充完整。
(2)可以大胆选择你最能驾驭的文体进行写作。
(3)文中不要出现真实的地名、校名、人名等，否则会被扣分。
(4)抄袭是一种不良行为，相信你不会照搬别人的文章，否则会影响你的成绩。
(5)考虑到内容的充实，文章不要少于500字。 【范文赏析】 范文一： 说说我自己
孤独使我成熟;孤独使我面对天地;孤独使我面对心灵;孤独使我面对生命。——题记孤独的我用浪漫装饰着我的世界;用清雅熏陶着我的心灵;用信念支撑我的生命。我在我的世界里吟我的诗词;我在精致的日记里抒发着我的情怀，我在柔柔的月光下放飞 无边的遐想，我在幽静的石径上捕捉浪漫;我在濛濛的细细雨中感受梦境。我甚至想：我的世界只要一本书，一杯茶，一扇窗户，一盏灯，一个安静的屋子就行了。夜深人静时，我在我的那方天空做着我痴痴的梦。我用无彩缤纷的梦幻做翅膀，让它在蓝天白云下自由地飞翔。即使孤独，仍然美丽!
孤独，使饿品尝到了奋斗的艰辛，以及艰辛后的喜悦;孤独，使我在长途跋涉中懂得如何让心灵不老。 我，只携一屡孤独的风，只身前往茫茫未知的远方，前进无边且遥远的扑朔迷离的地平线。不为别的，只为我一个喘息的歇处，不必再长途跋涉，不必再餐风露宿;不
为别的，职位那颗被现实的利剑刺痛千百遍而今仍隐隐坐痛的心;不为别的， 只为那颗孤独的心的期望。
穿过漫长的时空与黑夜，只等我的双足迈开征程的第一步，无情的风霜便一根根浸染了我的黑发，直到那它们后浸成白霜，但哪怕这样也好。我依然寻找，不停止，为我的孤独，我的理想，我的梦。即使孤独，依然执著!
孤独，让我的生命走向成熟。人生是由许多大大小小的感悟组成的，每一份感悟都代表着一份成熟，在经历风风雨雨之后，在我孤独的世界中，细细品味每一份挫折，每一份喜悦。得到的感悟是生活赠予我的最慷慨的礼物!
孤独，让我懂得了生命的价值。那就是精神上的高度克己与执著。这也是我永远追求的目标。孤独的我不是最优秀的，孤独的我却是最执著的。
点评：孤独不是寂寞，孤独不是沉落;孤独是在沉思，孤独是因执著。执著于美丽的梦想，执著于美好的生活。语言雅正而不板滞，意境清雅而不凝温。 范文二： 说说我自己
窗外，细雨纷飞，失望的心流浪在八月灰暗的天空下，十年寒窗，一朝梦醒，却已是物事人非，我问自己：我是否真的已失败，我何以为我?
是的，我相貌并不出众，可我勇于面对。少了与同龄人相互攀比的资本，我却有跟多的时间去观察周围的世界;少了物质上的满足，我却已另一种方式陶醉与西域的大漠风沙，流连与三月江南的杏花，出身的贫寒，并不是我自卑的根源，头脑的空虚与青春的虚耗才是真正的悲哀。
是的，在茫茫的人海中，我并不出众，但我一直在努力。梦醉来了，心中活着，只要心活着，便有梦的延续与重圆，我没有过人的天资在通往金字塔顶的途中，我甘愿做那只慢性的蜗牛，没有青山的伟岸;我却有平原的开阔，少了大海的波澜，却多了小溪的娟秀，我已袭击的方式努力，并不在乎最终的收获。
是的，尽管现在我不被人看视，我却始终充满激情。也曾梦中乘舟横绝千山，可现实总是无奈，可这一切并能浇灭心中向上的火焰。那只是黎明之前的黑暗，成功彼岸附近的风浪。我相信天道酬勤，有志者事竟成。
是的，在别人的眼中，我是无足轻重的存在，可在我心中，世间却因我而多了一分精彩，我迷恋于天空中飞鸟的自由，飞鸟存在的美 丽，从此多了一个人理解。我迷恋于海面上的千帆竞逐，那撑帆的舵手，便多了一个喝彩。
于是，我方明白，在世间，没有永远的成功，更内又绝对的失败。我只所以为我，是因为我存在，只要存在，一切都可以改变，只要存在，一切都可以创造。没有喝彩的现在，我为自己喝彩，在我心中，我就是一道不败的风景，可掌控自己的步伐。 风景这边独好，一切还待今朝。
点评：不因平凡而自弃，不为挫折而气馁，心里洒满阳光，便能活出精彩。语言隽秀明丽。 范文三： 说说我自己
哲学家说过：人是世界的灵魂，自己是人的生命的体现者。 文学家说过：人是阑珊的灯火，自己是人的梦想的实现者。 大千世界，人充斥着它的角角落落。我是多么的渺小啊!然而，在渺小中我窥视到了我的伟大。我是一支小小的火柴，可以照亮心灵的天空;我是一片嫩绿的新叶，可以倾倒多情的季节;我是一朵洁白的浪花，可以飞测博大的海洋。我还是我，我无法去申审视自己。我不知道如何摆正自己的位置? 我总是在犹豫中徘徊。然而却由此想到一些事情，譬如某种襟怀和精神。于是，我重翻“人生历程”，如吹皱春池，涟漪四起。 在《橡胶树下》我读懂了舒亭甘愿做橡胶树下的木棉的执著。在《蜀道难》中我读懂了李白“安能催眉折腰事权贵”的愤世疾俗。
在《交响曲》中我读懂了贝多芬琴架上飘出的铿锵有力的人生激情。 合上厚厚的书本，仰望苍穹，星光穿越数万年的距离投射进弥望者的视野，心潮起伏中，我似乎感觉到在先人们一次次演绎人生境界中透露出的精神积淀亦越过茫茫历史长空，汇聚在夜幕之上照耀着我们。
我重新走向现实生活。用微笑温暖世界，因为李素丽在这样做着，因为希望工程在提倡着……啊!世界，我需要拥抱你。
而如今，年代被历史的潮水淹没了，史料覆盖上青苔。走进复杂的社会。人生发生了扭曲——或慑于权势，或媚于孔方，或囿于圈子，或限于眼光，于是，美丽的心灵陷入泥潭，不能自拔。但，阅尽古今，真理告诉我们，这只是少数迷途羔羊。多数还是踏实的迈向远方。有“见”之才多乎亦哉。他们的可贵之处就是钱潮拍岸，我自笑
傲人生……想到这些，我心田由一些舒缓。因为世界是美丽，人生境界是高尚的。我怎摸不笑队人生。
“海到无边天作岸，山登绝顶我为峰”此为吾座佑铭，我仰望珠穆拉玛峰的雄伟壮丽，恍惚中，我看到峰巅金光闪闪。那是我人生最高境界啊! 身披一袭灿烂，心系一份执著，趁着青春的梦想，让我心飞扬。
在下一个清晨来临，燕生呢喃之前，打开天窗，你可听到松涛中蝉儿鸣叫的声响。那便是我，一夜长大的鸣叫。
点评：本文蕴含着作者真挚的情感，从题目中便不难感受到作者情感的波澜和思想的激荡。行文颇有气势，排比句式的运用更使文章如出鞘之剑般炫人眼目、动人心弦。正可谓我心飞扬，文采飞扬。
【篇二：给自己一片阳光,中考作文】
修改稿：给自己一片阳光
摸索于黑暗的地洞时，不妨给自己一片阳光，那么，黎明就在不远处。
窗外雨淅淅沥沥地下着，雨点时重时轻地打在屋外的雨棚上。天阴沉沉的，我对着空空如也的作文本发呆，却依旧毫无思路，心情乱地像一个拆了线乱滚的毛线球，手中的水笔时拿时放。已经中午了，我该去妈妈店里吃饭了。可是作文还没写，我只想一件事接着一件事去做，于是我依旧趴在桌上。满脑子的空白最终输给了黑暗，我只好拿起雨伞，走出家门。
去妈妈店里的路很短，但因地上到处是积水，我小心翼翼又极不耐烦地迂回着走。
来到妈妈店里，店里很忙，两个大锅在源源不断地冒着白雾，里面座满了顾客。妈妈正在飞快地擦着桌子。转身见我，立刻说道：“快来帮忙。”话还没说完，抹布就到了我手上。
“不要，我吃完饭就走。有篇作文我想了好久都没写过出来。”我想都没想说道。“雨大下了，呆会儿走吧。干干活，说不定作文有思路了。”“怎么可能？”我愁眉苦脸地说着，手臂被强行套上了袖套。
我只好忙碌地干了起来，陀螺般飞快地转于餐桌之间，擦桌，洗碗??忙忙碌碌中，我忘记了作文，心情似乎轻松起来。在这个生动的社会小剧场里，我看见了许多可爱而又有趣的场景。打着领带的上班族拎着公文包，匆匆进店，又蹬着皮鞋匆匆出店；上了年纪的老爷爷奶奶手扶手来店，坐在桌边细嚼慢咽吃着汤圆；平常百姓家的主
妇一手抱着小狗，一手拿着筷子，调皮的小狗在她怀里不停地动着，似乎为了惩罚她不给自己吃的??
这些生动活泼的脸，各具情态的动作，让我的思想插上了驰骋的翅膀，我突然发现，我有自己的作文素材了。
中午过后人少了，雨后天晴，我被放回家。走在路上，我仍旧看到那一泓泓积水，在阳光照射下，反射出五颜六色的光，很是美丽。我想：很多事并不一帆风顺，当钻入思路的死胡时，与其时机不熟而盲动，不如顺势而行，放松一下，打开心扉之窗，看看大千世界，让灿烂的阳光照在心灵之水上。
此时，朱熹先生的诗句“??向来枉费推移力，此日中流自在行”在脑海萦绕——原来生活就是创作的阳光！走进生活，给自己一片阳光！我豁然开朗。
楼老师修改2014,4（原作者：汪颖祺）
【篇三：2014中考作文范文】
2014中考作文范文 1.【2014青岛】
现在，有的同学不吃早饭就去上学。请针对这种现象写一篇短文。内容包括：
1.学生不吃早饭的原因。2.不吃早饭对学生的影响（至少两个方面）3.你认为应该如何合理安排早餐?
范文(1) some of us go to school without breakfast. we stay up late to study. we prefer sleeping a little longer to getting up early. so we don’t have enough time for breakfast.
in the morning we usually have four classes. it’s a long time before lunch. if we don’t have breakfast, we may feel hungry in class and won’t concentrate on our study. what’s more, it’s bad for our health.
from now on, we’d better get up a little earlier, and have noodles for breakfast. it’s also good to have bread, milk and eggs. it’s better to have some fruit after breakfast. let’s have breakfast every day. (98words)
范文(2) some of us go to school without breakfast. one reason is that they may not feel like eating anything early in the morning. another reason could be that they don’t think the food is delicious.
if they don’t have breakfast, they’ll get hungry during the classes, so they won’t listen to the teacher carefully. even worse, it’ll be bad for their health. a growing child needs enough nutrition.
breakfast provides the energy our body needs. i really hope everyone can have breakfast at a regular time. milke, eggs, bread, vegetables and fruits are good for us. a good breakfast is really necessary for us.(97 words) 2.【2014达州】
目前，举国畅行勤俭节约、反对铺张浪费。我们中学生应当在这些行动中该做些什么呢？请根据下面要求，联系实际，适当发挥，以
“save food and eat healthily”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 参考词汇：junk food, order the food, eat up, restaurant, healthy food.
save food and eat healthily
as middle school students, it’s our duty to do something for it. to save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any of food. especially, when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat. because many people in our country don’t have enough food to eat.
to eat healthily, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food at school or at home. of course, we may eat in the restaurant in case we have no time, but not too often. at last, we hope that we all work together at once. 3.【巴中市2014】
“中国梦”代表每个中国人的梦想。作为中学生，你对未来又怎样的憧憬？对人生有怎样的期盼？请你围绕“梦想”这一话题，根据提示信息写一篇英语短文。
内容要点提示：1.我的梦想是什么？ 2.我为什么有这样的梦想？ 3.我将怎样实现我的梦想？
提示词：achieve one’s dream, hold on to, difficulty, give up
my dream i dream of becoming a teacher when i’m older, and i hope to work in my old school. because i want to reward my teachers for teaching me so well, i’ll also try my best to teach my students as my teachers taught me. to achieve my dream, i’ll have to study harder from now on, i’ll never give up my
dream no matter what difficulties i met. i’m sure my dream will come true as long as i hold on to it.
if everyone does so, i strongly believe our china dreams must come true and china will get better and better. 4.【2014抚州】
未来很美好，你长大以后打算做什么？厨师、记者、艺术家------描述一个你梦想的职业。 my dream job
when i grow up, i’m going to be a singer. i love music and i’m good at singing. i want to be a singer like lady gaga. i can sing beautiful songs for people and make them happy. and also i can make much money. then i can buy a beautiful house with a garden for my parents because they do so much for me.
to realize my dream, first, i’m going to join the singing club and practise singing as often as possible. second, i’m going to be a student at a music school. at last, i’m going to take part in some singing competitions to improve myself. i hope my dream can come true. 5.【莆田市2014】
“平安出行，文明乘车”已成为人们普遍关心的一个社会热门话题。请你根据图表中所提示的内容要点用英语写一篇短文。 内容要点： 参考范文：
how can we keep safe when we go out? first, we must obey the traffic rules, especially when we cross the road. second, we are supposed to help children and the old to cross the road. third, we should be careful when we get on a bus.
while we are on a bus, we should remember not to spit in
public or throw litter around. neither should we speak loudly to disturb others. we’re expected to offer our seats to people in need. whats
more, smoking is not allowed on the bus.
in short, as students we should not only keep safe when we go out, but also be ready to help others． 6.【2014兰州】
学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下学校安全教育周收集的自我保护小贴士，并结合自己的观点，以“how can we protect ourselves?”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，谈
self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. but how can we protect ourselves? here are some of my suggestions.
first, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. second, if we are in danger, we
must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. also, we ought to eat healthily and
safely. besides, we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school. last but not
least（最后但也是很重要的）, summer is coming, we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone.
in short, everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger. 7.【2014滨州】
假如你校将举行以“中学生自我保护”为主题的英语征文活动，请根据下面的提示写短文。内容提示：
1.不带管制刀具（restricted knives）到校。 2.上下楼梯不要拥挤 3.注意饮食安全 4.注意交通安全，遇到紧急情况（emergency）要报警。
how to protect ourselves
how to protect ourselves is especially important to us students.
first, don’t take restricted knives to school. they might hurt our classmates or ourselves . secondly, there are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. so don’t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or
downstairs. or there may be an accident. thirdly, we should eat more healthy food and we’d better keep away from junk food, at last, we must pay attention to the traffic. remember to call the police for help when we have an emergency.
it’s our duty to protect ourselves. let’s start from today. 8.【2014安徽】
假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友david来信问及你们学校在署假期间对学生的.要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。
●家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗；●游泳安全：不独自去游泳，不去河、湖游泳； ●交通安全: 过马路要当心，不在马路上玩耍。提示词：electricity(n. 电) dear david,
glad to receive your e-mail. our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. let me tell you something about them.
we are asked to be careful with electricity when we are using it. it is dangerous to play with fire, for it may cause terrible
accidents. we should make sure doors and windows are shut before we leave. besides, we are not allowed to swim alone, especially in deep rivers or lakes. if we really want to, we must go to the swimming pool with our parents or teachers. what’s more, following traffic rules is also very important. everyone should watch out when crossing the road. and our school warns us not to play on the road.
i think these rules are necessary as safety comes first. have a good summer holiday! 10.【2014河南】
你身边的每个人对你来说都具有特殊的意义。请以“my
special____”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友、老师、同学等。 my special grandma
my grandma is special to me because we’re like friends. she always helps me out whenever i am in trouble. there are no secrets between us.
when i am with my grandma, we spend a lot of happy time
together. i know my grandma is very smart because she seems to know everything. my grandma is good at many things. one thing she’s best at is cooking. she often cooks delicious food for me. i know my grandma loves me and i love her as well. 11.【2013聊城】
在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“my father”为题的英语作文， my father
-year-old math teacher. he is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes. he always works hard. his classes are lively and interesting and deeply loved by his students.
my father is an honest and kind man. he often helps other children and me with our maths. my father’s hobby is playing table tennis. we often play table tennis together at the
weekends. my father is not only a good father but also a good friend. i have learned a lot from him. i love my father very much. 12.【江宁区2014一模】
今年央视春晚，一曲《时间都去哪儿了》让许多观众深受感动。假设你是九年级一班的李明，你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父母”英语演讲比赛。演讲内容包括：
1.讲述一件你和父母之间难忘的事情; 2.你对“感恩父母”的认识；3.具体的感恩行动（至少两点）；
4.表达祝福与愿望。 fever at midnight. i felt so terrible. my
mother took me to hospital immediately. she took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.
my parents give me almost everything. however, they don’t want to get any reward from me. from now on, i will help my parents do more housework. my mother’s birthday is coming, i will make a birthday card for her. i must thank her by studying hard. i hope my parents are in good health forever. 14.【2011郴州】
假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加郴州市屮学生英诂演讲比赛。演讲的题目是 we should help parents
parents do housework. now many students are too lazy to do housework. but i think we should help parents do some housework because they are busy with their work and tired after work. i often help my parents do many chores. in the morning, i will make the bed and water flowers. they are
relaxing and interesting.in the evening, i often clean the room and take out the trash. when i see the tidy room, i feel proud of myself. my parents are pleased with me. i think its our duty to help our parents with some chores. 15.【2012新疆阜康】
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以i am not a child any more为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。 i am not a child any more
i have changed a lot during the past three years. i used to be weak and short. but now, i am strong and as tall as my father. the most important thing is that i have learned to care about others.it was a wednesday evening. when i went back home, no one was in. so i cooked the meal. i didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. they both
said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. at bedtime, i fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. my
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