1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请您修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜钱(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
At lunch in the first day of my high school, I saw a girl sit alone. I decided to sit with her and we had a pleasant chat. Late, we became close friends in following three years. One day, he shared something touching with me. “Do you remember the day when you come over and sat next to me, wearing a big smile?” she asked me. “I want you to know how much special you are. I was disappointing at that time, but your smile made my day,” she added. I can’t help smile each time I think of the scene, that shows me that a simple act of kindness can change our lives greatly.
2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last winter holiday, I go to the countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I found a change there. For the first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big house to raise
some horse. They also had a small pond(池塘), in that they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned return every two years, but he agreed.
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Not all cultures greet each others the same way, nor are they comfortable in same way with touching or distance between people. In the same way that people communicate to spoken language, they also express his feelings using unspoken “language” through physical distance, actions or posture. English people, for example, do not usually stands very close to others or touch stranger as soon as they meet. However, people from places like Spain, Italy or South American countries approach others closely and are more likely to touching them. Most people around the world now greet each other by shaking a hands, and some cultures use other greetings as well, such as the Japanese, which prefer to bow.
Love, Li Hua
4.假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间相互修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中 共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday our school organized a mountain-climbing activity, which purpose was to inspire us
students to take more outdoor exercise. Hundreds of students take part in it. Having gathering at the Xiangshan Park at 8:00, they set out for the top in high spirits. Along the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery, chatting with each other happy. If someone fell behind, others would come and lend them hand, such as carrying their bags or giving them encouraged words. After about two and a half hour, we all reached the top, where we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited from us a lot.Not only did we get some exercise, and also we promoted our friendship.
5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除:把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Most of us feel nervously when we take an important exam. There is no doubt whether exams are important, but it's more important to have a right attitude. As matter of fact, exams are only a mean of evaluating. Therefore, there was no need to worry too much about the results. Only by making good preparations for exams can we avoid suffer from the pressure. We'd better to go out for a walk and doing some outdoor exercise before exams. Besides, having enough sleep can make us full of energy and make them possible for us to perform well. A cup of hot milk before going to bed might help us have a sound sleeping.
答案以及解析
1.答案: At lunch
sitinthe first day of my high school, I saw a girl alone. I decided to sit with her
sittingonLate, we became close friends in the following three years. One Laterand we had a pleasant chat.day,
hecomeshared something touching with me. “Do you remember the day when you over shecameand sat next to me, wearing a big smile?” she asked me. “I want you to know how much special you are. I was
disappointingat that time, but your smile made my day,” she added. I can’t help
disappointedsmilethateach time I think of the scene, shows me that a simple act of kindness can
smilingwhichchange our lives greatly. 解析: 1.【答案】in改为on
【解析】”on the first day“表示“在第一天”,表示具体的一天用介词on,故将in改为on。 2.【答案】sit改为sitting
【解析】“see sb. doing sth.“表示”看见某人正在做某事“,此处指”高中第一天吃午餐时,我看到一个女孩正独自一人坐着“,故将sit改为sitting。 3.【答案】Late改为Later
【解析】结合句意可知,此处表示“随后、后来”,Late意为“晚的、迟到的”,句意不符,故改为Later。
4.【答案】following前面加the
【解析】“in the following years”为固定搭配,表示“在接下来的几年里”,故加定冠词the。 5.【答案】he改为she
【解析】根据上文“a girl”可知,此处用人称代词she指代,故将he改为she。 6.【答案】come改为came
【解析】分析句子结构可知,该句为when引导的定语从句,根据句中的sat一词可知,该从句时态为一般过去时,因此用动词过去式came。 7.【答案】how后面的much去掉
【解析】此处how引导的句子为感叹句,表示“多么”,how后面直接加形容词,故去掉much。
8.【答案】disappointing改为disappointed
【解析】disappointing表示“令人失望的”,修饰事物或事情;disappointed表示“感到失望的”,形容人的主观感受,此处用来表示“我那时感到失望”,主语为人,故用disappointed。 9.【答案】smile改为smiling
【解析】”can't help doing sth.“表示“情不自禁做某事”,故将smile改为smiling。 10.【答案】shows前面的that改为which
【解析】分析句子结构可知,该从句位于“,”后,为非限制性定语从句,且指物,应用which,其在从句中作主语,故将that改为which。 2.答案:
During my last winter holiday, I
goto the countryside with my father to visit my wentgrandparents. I found a change there. For the first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and big house to raise some
anotherhereanimals. Last winter when I went again, they had a
thereotherhorsethat. They also had a small pond(池塘), in they raised fish. horseswhichsellhappilyMy grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by fish. I felt that their life
sellinghappyhad improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, buthe agreed. and3.答案:
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othersthe same way, nor are they comfortable in the same way otherwith touching or distance between people. In the same way that people communicate tohisspoken language, they also express feelings using unspoken “language” through withtheirphysical distance, actions or posture. English people, for example, do not usually close to others or touch
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touchItaly or South American countries approach others closely and are more likely to Most people around the world now greet each other by shaking a hands, other greetings as well, such as the Japanese,
whichprefer to bow. whoandsome cultures use butLove, Li Hua
4.答案:
Last Sunday our school organized a mountain-climbing activity, us students to
whichpurpose was to inspire whosetakemore outdoor exercise. Hundreds of students take part in it. Having tookgatheringtheyat the Xiangshan Park at 8:00, set out for the top in high spirits. Along the way
gatheredwewe enjoyed the beautiful scenery, chatting with each other
happy. If someone fell behind,
happilyothers would come and lend them a hand, such as carrying their bags or giving them encouragedhourwords. After about two and a half, we all reached the top, where we jumped
encouraginghoursand cheered with joy.
The activity benefited from us a lot.Not only did we get some exercise, promoted our friendship. 解析:
1. which改为whose.考查定语从句引导词.这里是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词是 a mountain-climbing activity,且从句缺少定语,此处意为\"它的目的是鼓励我们学生参加更多的户外锻炼\".
2. take改为took.考查时态.这里说的是上星期天的事情,因此要用一般过去时. 3. gathering改为gathered.考查非谓语动词时态.having done表示动作先后,因此要把gathering改为gathered.
4. they改为we.考查代词指代.根据前面的\"…inspire us students to take more outdoor exercise\"可知这里指的是\"我们\".
5. happy改为happily.考查副词.这里用副词修饰非谓语动词短语chatting with each other. 6. hand前加a.考查冠词及固定短语.lend sb. a hand意为\"帮某人一个忙\".
7. encouraged改为encouraging.考查形容词.此处表示\"鼓舞人心的话语\",因此要用encouraging.
8. hour改为hours.考查名词单复数.two and a half hours表示\"两个半小时\".
9. 去掉from.考查介词.此处表示\"这个活动对我们很有益处\",此处benefit是及物动词,
andalso we but意为\"有益于\",因此去掉from.
10. and改为but.考查固定句型.not only …but also…意为\"不但…而且…\". 5.答案:
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