高考英语百日训练之应用文写作(38)含答案详解

【题文】

假定你是李华，你的朋友Henry向你询问快餐(Fast Food)在中国的发展情况，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.很流行，尤其儿童和青少年更喜欢吃

2.原因：方便，节约时间，店里干净，舒适，服务周到，食品美味。 3.缺点：不是一种均衡的饮食，不能满足青少年身体的需要 4.你对快餐的态度。 注意：

1. 词数100左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you something about fast food in China.

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Thanks for your kindness.

Your’s， LiHua

【答案】 Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to tell you something about fast food in China.

Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.

There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. Second, the environment of fast food restaurant is both clean and comfortable. Third, it has excellent service, and the quality of food is guaranteed.

However, in terms of nutrition, fast food is far from perfect to satisfy the children’s need. It

doesn’t offer enough fiber and body-building and energy-giving food. Because it is usually not a balanced diet.

As far as I am concerned, fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry. It’s good for people, especially children, to eat fast food as little as possible.

Thanks for your kindness.

Yours, LiHua

【解析】

【详解】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇电子邮件：你的朋友Henry向你询问快餐(Fast Food)在中国的发展情况，请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.很流行，尤其儿童和青少年更喜欢吃 2.原因：方便，节约时间，店里干净，舒适，服务周到，食品美味。3.缺点：不是一种均衡的饮食，不能满足青少年身体的需要。4.你对快餐的态度。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：especially among children and teenagers（特别是在孩子和青少年当中）；both clean and comfortable（干净和舒适）；in terms of nutrition（就营养而言）；enough fiber and body-building and energy-giving food（足够的纤维，加强体质和给予能量的食物）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【点睛】本文是一封电子邮件，内容符合要求，文章结构布局合理，同时文中使用高级词汇the quality of food is guaranteed.文中使用被动语态；Because it is usually not a balanced 和句子。

diet.句中Because引导原因状语从句；fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry.句中when引导时间状语从句；另外，First, Second, However, As far as I am concerned, as little as possible等的运用为文章增色添彩。

【标题】江西省高安中学2017-2018学年高一下学期期末考试英语试题 【结束】