gre高分作文（集锦10篇）

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首先你的GRE作文不能写很口语化的表达，因为这是学术性写作;其次你不能千篇一律的短句或者散句，而要长短结合，主次分明;最后在遇到重复概念的时候你不能用同一个词汇表达10次。

当然，我也不是要你挑战自己的智力极限，全部用GRE单词去写GRE作文，事实上如果你这样做了，效果不见得好，因为很多GRE单词美国人也不认识。你只需要在合适的地方用合适的词就可以了。整个GRE作文的语言要求在于两点：sentence variation (句式变换)和expressive diction(生动的选词)。

语言质量的'提高是一个漫长的过程，这需要我们及早做好规划，按部就班的来学习和提高。对于即将参加考试的同学，最好的提高语言质量的方法不是背模板，而是仿写范文。如果你能把一篇范文从里到外再加每个标点符号都研究透，然后再自己操刀按照范文的思路从头到位认真的仿写一遍，那么你不仅能收获地道的表达、丰富的句型，更能加深你对思路、逻辑和组织的了解，典型的一举多得啊。

想要取得新GRE作文高分，我们在复习过程中要锻炼自己的英语水平。不仅仅是新GRE作文需要高潮的英语水平，在以后的美国生活学习中，也非常重要。所以，在复习GRE写作关键在于写作过程中同时提高英语水平，一举两得，掌握这个GRE写作技巧，就可以完美应对GRE写作。

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variety

最好长短句结合，ets藐视总用短句的人：Since most of the sentences are short and choppy, the ideas they try to communicate are also

position

在有全面深刻理解的基础上，观点最好新颖独到(对ets来说)，但必须保证能自圆其说。

meaning skillfully

可用于论证的一切技巧(估计老美自己用起来也得费点心思)。比如文章的行文方向，起承转合不用明显的标志词(first, second, however, on the other hand, the second example illustrating my point)，而是依靠论述的内在脉络(只可意会不可言传)自然而然的引到下一块内容。

reasons

这是最重要的一个得分点。

examples

用来支持reason的，使抽象的reason更具体，更易被读者理解，从而产生共鸣，或使其更可信，更有说服力。可用的例子有自己的经历，引言。

简单说就是不跑题。中心论点明确，全文不跑题;各段主题句明确，围绕主题句论述。

文章采用的论述结构，分几个部分论述，每部分有几段，各部分、各段间的关系是什么。

ideas logically

using transitional phrases起承转合词，过渡句，或有此种作用的句子，总之起到help organize the ideas and move the argument forward。

事物的两面性(同一事物有优点就有缺点，相比较的事物有各自的优缺点)，从多角度分析事物(分析不同领域)。

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"It?is?unfortunate?that?today''s?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the?students'"?

As?an?elementary?educator,(from?whence?should?curriculum?come);?then?meander,(directly?endorsed?by?this?statement),?data?and?knowledge?into?students'

In?a?complex?and?frightening?society,',?in?order?to?prepare?our?students?for?this?society,()?need?to?be?developed?by?the?district',

Were?we?to?provide?students?the?ultimate?authority?in?curriculum?development,'?(or?for?that?matter,??teachers'),?I?value?the?abilities?to?read,

I?do?NOT?think?it?is?unfortunate?that?today's?educators?emphasize?students',?however,,?teachers?of?today's?children?have?the?responsibility?(yes,?the?duty!),?is?to?provide?students?variety?and?choices?within?the?context?of?""

COMMENTARY?

"middle?road",

The?writer?endorses?a?curriculum?that?emphasizes?strong?basic?skills?(reading,?writing,?and?math)?and?reminds?the?reader?that?the?teachers'?ultimate?responsibility?should?be?to?bring?curricula?to?life?in?order?to?""?

This?essay?displays?a?strong?facility?with?written?English?language;,

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"It?is?unfortunate?that?today''?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the?students'"?

,,?so?do?our?educational?needs,

,,',

,

A?third?party?that?has?a?role?in?curriculum?development?is?private?business,?including?research?labs,?goods?and?service?providers,,?either?by?stating?so?or?by?not?hiring?unqualified?students?

The?quotation?echoes?of?a?time?when?school?learning?consisted?of?the?three?"R"'

For?our?schools?to?keep?pace?with?our?society?we?need?to?adjust?our?curriclum?to?what?it?should?be,?what?we?want?it?to?be,,,?so?do?our?educational?needs,

,,',

,

A?third?party?that?has?a?role?in?curriculum?development?is?private?business,?including?research?labs,?goods?and?service?providers,,?either?by?stating?so?or?by?not?hiring?unqualified?students?

The?quotation?echoes?of?a?time?when?school?learning?consisted?of?the?three?"R"',?what?we?want?it?to?be,

COMMENTARY?

's?argument?--?that?curriculum?should?be?determined?by?many?voices,,(,?sex?education?and?AIDS?education?are?cited?as?examples?of?how?schools?are?offering?new?classes?to?meet?the?contemporary?needs),,?"An?unenlightened?society?is?a?grave?society?with?little?hope"

The?conclusion?is?appropriate;?it?reinforces?the?main?idea?of?the?essay,

structure?is?generally?adequate,?although?many?of?the?sentences?would?benefit?from?restructuring?and?the?use?of?transitions?to?more?effectively?communicate?the?writer'

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"It?is?unfortunate?that?today''?duty?to?determine?the?curriculum?and?the?students'"??

In?today's?society,,,?and?educators',?but?the?educators?should?strive?to?insure?that?each?individual?student?truly?gains?from?their?education,

It?is?vital?to?the?continued?success?and?expansion?of?the?United?States,,,?the?young?people?of?today?will?expect?to?be?challenged,,,?but?it?is?the?educators'

In?conclusion,

COMMENTARY?

This?brief?essay?is?flawed?by?its?generalities,?repetition,"breeze?through"'?potential?and?educators'

,

Also,?the?phrasing?is?often?vague?("giving?all?that?they?can"?and?"path?of?success"),?and?the?syntax?is?at?times?poorly?controlled?("young?people?of?today?will?expect?to?be?challenged,")??Still,,

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写作备考要注意限时训练

对于任何的考试都是一样，练习不仅要趁早，还需要在练习的时候加强对写作模式的总结。有很多人都以为刚开始写好一点花多长时间都值得其实到后来发现根本不是这样，限时和不限时两种感觉完全不同。限时之后就会发现，GRE考试没有固定的套路在三十分钟内基本不可能完整的写出一篇从没见过的这里的套路不是大家都熟知的在网上和书上流行的摸版。而是自己总结出来的一套写作模式，更重要的是思维模式。

GRE作文少用模板锻炼个人风格

小编建议大家写作尽量少用模版，因为每个人要有自己的写作套路，别人的模版尽量不要直接拿来用，毕竟那些还是别人的东西，最好自己能弄出来自己的风格来。而写作套路，就是仁者见仁，智者见智的事情了，练习作多了，提纲列多了，基本就出来了。

积累写作经验需要多加练习

对于GRE写作来说，想要得到高分就必须要勤加练习，通过练习我们能够得出自身的不足点，也能发现自己的写作优势。所以，在复习GRE写作的时候，一定要多加练习。

写完文章还要认真修改做好总结

写完之后立即改;自己改完之后再请别人改;放一段时间以后再回过头来自己改。修改多次之后自然会有提高，多掌握一些GRE词汇量。最好，平时一定要注意积累。句型、短语和相关单词的收集和分类很重要。比如对教育类的主题，一些的单词和短语是比较有针对性的，单词和短语最好从报纸、网页、国外的范文里或者网上经典文章里搜集，如果自己乱猜乱凑可能适得其反，而且每次用都觉得心里七上八下。

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,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

,?the?conclusion?that?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment?would?"", averted?by?the?skater'

,?if?the?majority?of?injuries?are?skin?abrasions?and?closed-head?injuries,,?if?injuries?are?caused?by?collision?with?vehicles?(,?cars)?or?pedestrians,,?if?the?primary?types?of?injuries?are?soft-tissue?injuries?such?as?torn?ligaments?and?muscles,?back?injuries?and?the?like,

Commentary??

This?strong?response?gets?right?to?the?work?of?critiquing?the?argument,?observing?that?it?"indicates?a?possible?relationship"?but?that?its?conclusion?""??It?raises?three?central?questions?that,?if?answered,?might?undermine?the?soundness?of?the?argument:??

--?What?are?the?characteristics?of?the?total?population?of?skaters??--?What?is?the?usefulness?of?protective?or?reflective?gear?in????preventing?or?mitigating?rollerskating-related?injuries??--?What?are?the?types?of?injuries?sustained?and?their?causes???

,?but?the?clear?organization,?strong?control?of?language,

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,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

Although?the?argument?stated?above?discusses?the?importance?of?safety?equipment?as?significant?part?of?avoiding?injury,"accidents";?skin?abrasions?or?possibly?bone?fracture?of?a?select?few?areas?such?as?knees,?elbows,?hands,(which?are?in?fact?most?vulnerable?to?this?sport); (,?heart-attack);?exhaustion;?strained?muscles,?ligaments,?or?tendons;,?even?without?protective?equipment,?would?decrease?greatly?if?people?participating?in?the?sport?had?proper?training,?good?physical?health,?warm-up?properly?before?beginning?(stretching),?as?well?as?take?other?measures?to?prevent?possible?injury,?such?as?common-sense,

Commentary??

This?adequate?response?targets?the?argument's?vague?and?inconclusive?""??The?essay?identifies?and?critiques?the?illogical?reasoning?that?results?from?the?misguided?use?of?the?argument's?statistics:??

--?that?non-use?of?equipment?may?be?"automatically"?assumed?to?be?the????cause?of?injury?

--?that?"accidents"?may?refer?to?minor?injuries?

--?that?injuries?may?result?from?other?causes?--?skating?in?the?dark,????failure?to?train?or?warm-up?properly,?failure?to?recognize?one's????physical?limitations??

,,?too,

,?though,

GRE作文高分复习攻略解读 这4个练笔注意事项不能忘相关

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,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,).??Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,

Although?the?argument?stated?above?discusses?the?importance?of?safety?equipment?as?significant?part?of?avoiding?injury,"accidents";?skin?abrasions?or?possibly?bone?fracture?of?a?select?few?areas?such?as?knees,?elbows,?hands,(which?are?in?fact?most?vulnerable?to?this?sport); (,?heart-attack);?exhaustion;?strained?muscles,?ligaments,?or?tendons;,?even?without?protective?equipment,?would?decrease?greatly?if?people?participating?in?the?sport?had?proper?training,?good?physical?health,?warm-up?properly?before?beginning?(stretching),?as?well?as?take?other?measures?to?prevent?possible?injury,?such?as?common-sense,

Commentary??

This?adequate?response?targets?the?argument's?vague?and?inconclusive?""??The?essay?identifies?and?critiques?the?illogical?reasoning?that?results?from?the?misguided?use?of?the?argument's?statistics:??

--?that?non-use?of?equipment?may?be?"automatically"?assumed?to?be?the????cause?of?injury?

--?that?"accidents"?may?refer?to?minor?injuries?

--?that?injuries?may?result?from?other?causes?--?skating?in?the?dark,????failure?to?train?or?warm-up?properly,?failure?to?recognize?one's????physical?limitations??

,,?too,

,?though,

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在每一段开始的第一行，最好能明确地表达你想说什么，也就是中心句。

这做法虽然死板，但往往有奇效。特别是对自己逻辑推理不是很有信心的各位，说清楚了，没说全面总比说都没说清楚要好。

第二，写作这个东西其实是相通的

我们中的很大一部分在高考结束后恐怕很少再写这么长的，同时主题又相对深刻的文字。英文只是一个表达方式，而论证过程则和中文没有任何区别。如果实在觉得难以上手，不妨先试试写一篇自己认为很深刻的中文文章看看。在逻辑和思想方面，这样的训练方式会有奇效，同时对于心理是一个不小的鼓舞。

第三，有关范文

范文是一定要看的，看什么。我建议，开始的时候，不要纠结于某某单词的某某用法，大不了你写的时候不用就是了。要大略的看，看作者是怎么展开题目，从哪几个方面入手，各自怎么论证的。

很重要的一点是，不要迷信范文。没有任何证据表明你看到的这篇范文出自一位逻辑学大师的手，即便确实如此，对于同一问题有不同的见解这是再正常不过的事情。思路可以借鉴，但千万不要僵化。

与此本质相同的另一个方法是，请别人改作文，就观点改或就文字改，按个人情况取舍。

第四，专门练习句子

如果真的想兼顾文字，不如在练逻辑练累的时候(我知道很容易累，很枯燥)，专门拿出一点时间去写一些句子，效果更好。

如果说模版的话，这样就足够了。模版这个东西，背太多没好处，太容易局限思维，还有雷同的风险。

第五，培养找到错误的能力

还要说明一点，以上是针对整个AW而言。对于argument，特别需要注意的是培养找到错误的能力。

具体方法是，阅读一定量的题目。

这样的好处有二：

一、通过阅读题目，只找错误来训练。

二、没有谁能保证argument里面不会出现一个你不认识的单词，万一是个关键词，那可就……

argument其实和issue也是想通的，锻炼一者的同时另一者一定也会提高，所以不要纠结浪费时间的问题。

第六，关于机经

我的意见是，反正写什么都是写，不如按照机经写。当然，如果能写很多很多，那我的意见没有什么参考价值。

综上所述，要想获得新GRE满分作文，掌握正确的复习方法是很重要的，各位考生可以结合自身的具体情况，参考以上这六种经验总结来帮助自己获得新GRE写作高分。